Basically i think that the only part of my magazine which is good are the title and the image. 'Sky speaks out..' quote needs to be more snappier and look less tabloid like. The Pacha night club and Rhianna interview are not needed at all, they need to be replaced by something better with perhaps a new original image. I have forgotten to put a date and issue on it and a bar code, they may be small details but all magazines have them not just music magazines. The 'free inside' needs removing and the '70 page special' needs to be the same font as 'Britain's top artists' as they are related and also needs to be clear that it's the top music artists.
When i printed the double page spread out i realised how big the text was and that it needed to be much smaller which therefor means that more interview is needed. The advertisement at the right needs to be taken off so there is more space for the interview. Also the image of 'Sky' needs to be re thought about, it could be better and needs to be more images, if i opened a magazine i would expect more on the interview. Also there needs to be some pull lines and an introduction to what this page is, i have only gone straight to the interview without letting he audience know what it is.
Once again when printed off the text was too big and there needs to be more pages listed. The images ok but i could have some more original images so that i can make as much as possible of it to be my ideas.
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